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With the android newly repaired and cleaned up, Karen did not want to make the same mistake as before. The disturbing memory of the bleeding, convulsing android was still fresh in her mind. She did not want the android's insatiable curiosity to cause another catastrophe.

Karen gently but swiftly untethered all the android's wires and tubes from the machines, starting with the chest and ending with the head, making sure that all internal tubing was securely clamped shut. She even closed up most of the chest, to keep her creation from becoming too intrigued by its own heart.

She reached across the operating table, and flipped the switch. The android sat up rather quickly, giving Karen little time to move her arm out of the way. Now that it was more freely mobile, the android immediately wanted to get up and walk through the lab. Alas, it still reasoned like a computer.

"Activate leg components," it declared simply in its childlike voice. It lowered itself cautiously off the table, holding on to it for support.

Upon feeling the cold floor beneath its toes, it exclaimed, "Stand!", only to be met with disappointment. As its determined words were still echoing around the lab, its legs loosely slid out from underneath, and it ended up sitting on the ground. Clearly, the legs still required some work. The little android was clearly puzzled, and sat on the floor looking around. If it wasn't going to get to walk around the lab, it reasoned, it would at least get a good look at the floor.

"Oh dear," remarked Karen, as she dashed out of the lab, coming back with a wheelchair. She hoisted the drooping, bemused android from beneath the shoulders, and sat it down in the wheelchair, taking care to position its legs correctly. Just then, there was a noise in the hallway outside. It was the approaching footsteps of Diane, the department director. Karen froze.

"Karen, just what are you doing with that wheelchair? You know that all supplies need to be checked out before you-". She stopped mid-sentence upon seeing what appeared to be a bald child with part of its head removed, exposing some electronics. The android twisted around to look at her with its uncanny gaze. Diane had trouble keeping her jaw from dropping.

"Hello, Diane," it said in greeting. The android waved its still-incomplete right arm in a friendly gesture. It was too much for Diane to handle. She opened and closed her mouth, gasping for air like a fish, unable to form words. Suddenly she felt very lightheaded, and then everything faded to black.
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So here's the (sort of) continuation of The Activation. It's really short, but I might add on. Let me know what needs to be improved; I'm always open to suggestions.
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EDIT: I've added a new plot twist, so the ending is better!
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Mood: Joy ~MrRobotov Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like all 3 of your stories. They are interesting and kinda addictive - you wonder what can happen next. :)
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~chickenpede Oct 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, it makes me really happy to hear that! :heart: Being primarily a visual artist, writing things is a bit of a shot in the dark for me...
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Mood: Joy ~MrRobotov Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome. :D
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=Zenoxen Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Someone wasen't expecting, hum?
And..that's so cute, the android's first steps ^^
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~chickenpede Dec 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Glad you liked it! :D
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=Zenoxen Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved it. Is there any more? I'd love if you could submit the whole collection to my group, :iconstarkindustriessia:....which is a fan group, for both Iron Man and Science in general....I'd be deeply honred.
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!chefhalfnote May 18, 2011  Student General Artist
The story is interesting and amusing, but it doesn't feel so much like a short story as it does a scene in a short story.
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~chickenpede May 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks! I agree, it is definitely a scene that is part of a short story. The actual story as of now consists of this snippet and 2 more slightly longer scenes, with a lot of gaps in between. I'm still trying to figure out what should go in the gaps... :shrug:
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The android's child-like curiosity is adorable! I especially like how his heart has to be safeguarded from his insatable curiosity, like how outlets have to be covered for children. Cute.
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~chickenpede May 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Aw, thank you!
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